Lincoln: (marches up to Lynn) Straight from you, you big bully! Theres no need to shout. ], Lynn: "Lincoln, you could've tripped and cost us the entire game! The parents were shown to be hypocritical at the end, telling their children to behave when they cause the whole family to be kicked out and then tricking them into going to Aunt Ruth's and letting them have a nice weekend at a homemade spa (yes I'm aware the Aunt Ruth thing happens more or less unintentionally but come on, it doesn't really make a massive difference). ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. Meatbrain here and her dumb softball, this never would have happened! The Loud House Fanfiction: No Such Luck PM1's Version We're already hanging on a thread as it is! After half an hour, Lincoln begins to sweat like crazy and lose his mind. Give it back! SEE YOU NEVER!" Any bad luck? And even if you don't always succeed, your a good at it. Rita asked. (He walks back and forth to get attention) You guys have spent the whole weekend obsessing over this ridiculous good luck/bad luck thing at my expense! He staggers inside, weak and collapsed. Honestly, while Rita still a little sad that her dear aunt disowned her and her family, she thought it was for the best, if Ruth felt it was right to call her children monsters then that wasn't someone she wanted her family to be around. I do it almost everyday, and it'snot that I hate going to them or don't want to support you, butsometimes, I wanted to take a break form all that, you know,unwind. "Really," Luan said, raising her eyebrows at her parents, "Because if you ask me parents don't go skinny dipping at night, or get the entire family kicked out of the hotel or make their children feel guilty for ruining a vacation that they already ruined." Thats not how it works! Now we've broken the shower." Luan: (with a broken voice) "We treated you like an outcast because we were stupid enough to believe that junk! The heat increases. Those were the last words Ruth spoke to the Loud family before hanging up. (The sisters tear up over their passions being so heavily insulted) I hate it that you lowlifes never learn a thing! Lola finished with. And after that, the whole room was silent. You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. You're scaring even me. NO SUCH LUCK AFTERMATH by JackLeighton19 on DeviantArt Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. SQUIRRELS WIN! it is true that the Duke's actions were noble and his heart was stout, but he held doubts of his. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) "Huh. showing a flashback of the episode No Such Luck. Luan brought it. Lynn Sr.: He wrecked our trophy case to!? (He gathers up a sleeping bag, pillow and snacks. I would feel awful if you did. A late St. Patrick's Day story for austin2468. "Good riddance." Rita: (Gasps) Lincoln! (Lisa turns to him) Whatever happened to Woman of Science, huh!?! I was horrible to you! ", Lincoln: (to Lola) "Lola, all those pageants I went to, did anything bad happen those times? "No," Lynn Sr. and Rita responded with, not liking where this was going. Dont rage out at us. And he did not look happy. "But you know what's even more lousy than that?" alternateending stpatricksday theloudhouse lincolnloud theloudhousefanfiction stpatricksday2022 Requested by austin2468. It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. No Such Luck, No Such Love (Fanfic) - TV Tropes Rita: Sweetie, please! Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! nosuchluck loudhouse Well here is an alternate ending to No Such Luck that ends on a happy note. It's too broken, even for me! Im melting! Lisa: I was a fool to fall for it all, I swear. I have failed as a human being. Rita shouted, as she and Lynn Sr. became shocked. Luna blushed. (Lincoln picks up the head and jumps up and down on it several times.). Lynn Sr.: Son..we didn't mean to..we just.we were wrong to-. You can never come back. Especially Miss. How can I help you?" 902 8 2. This triggered events that none of the Loud House family could have seen. I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! But right now, ive had it! I don't want to pick a movie you guys possiblyly won't enjoy, I want to watch something all of us will enjoy." Luna: [Blushes] Really? I don't even care about that anymore. I don't expect it to be good, I just felt like doing an alternative ending. Submit your writing. Was the thought on her mind. (Tears up) Our only bro. "Yeah, brah." ", Lana: "Yeah, we know everyone needs to unwind once in a while. We didn't just barge into the room. Everyone turned to the doorway and saw the Loud kids standing there, red with rage and ready to destroy. (yet another author interruption: I know this sounds harsh, but in all fairness, that is a pretty stupid thing to do and the reason behind it doesn't help). Unfortunately, they were not quick enough and, in a swift moment, the four were launched into the room across the hall, landing in a painful pile on the floor. We were given the room." Lincoln: Lana. Everyone in the room went silent, stood still, afraid to make a move or a noise. by Jeffrey Gaskill 191 2 1 Lincoln was outside the backporch but he went through that window like it was unlocked and his so-called family return home from the baseball game and then they went ins. Immediately, all the kids started shouting at the parents and, as they did so, the other guests and employees in the spa took this opportunity to escape, they didn't want to stay and watch mayhem unfold. Ruthless People extended ending13. And once again, computer typing was heard and, after a couple minutes, she got her answer. ], Baseball Announcer: "It's goingit's goingIT'S GONE!!! ", Lincoln:[scared] "Lynn's right! Rita: I guess this is what we get for selling all his stuff. Lincoln: Im sorry this happened. "WELL I HATE ALL OF YOU, TOO!" And, as a result, everyone, including the obnoxious guys and Lucy, were terrified. ), Lynn Sr.: "Get ready kids, we're going to the movies again, but Lincoln is coming with us. As in, how ill knock your head over heels! I hate fashion shows! ", [Margo takes a swing and flings herself into the umpire and the bat hits her helmet. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. Directors Kyle Marshall (segment Frog Wild) Chris Savino (segment No Such Luck) Writers Chris Savino Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were just about ready to ram these three rude jerks with the couch in the room. YOU'RE BANNED! NOTE: I apologise to those who hate NSL fics, but ive really wanted to get this off my chest. "Do you have any idea how lousy you made us feel?" DeviantArt Protect. And then blew more raspberries and spit on them some more (hopefully the last author interruption but if not then I'll let you know: I know her seat is located in the first row behind the driver in canon but for this instance of going along with not wanting to look at their parents, the siblings put Lily's seat in the far back to help the other siblings not have to look at their parents, I know this is a little wrong, but please understand it shows how mad the siblings are). No such luck: alternate ending 2 by iann28 on DeviantArt "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. It was never fun but I'm glad it's over." I was being a sore loser! So we've been in here trying to pass the time. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Post-Story Notice: Anyway. . The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. Not a loud alt ending6. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. See if I care! "What do you kids want?" No Such Luck Aftermath - Moving Out - The Loud House Fanon Wikia lincoln. I know you would never label me bad luck, and youd never neglect me. *Lincoln approaches the front yard with a megaphone. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). "And mom should know better," Lori shouted back, glaring at her mother specifically, "Then to take us to that woman!" They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. ESPECIALLY THE EXTRA TOE! They wanted to comfort him, but they both knew that he would push them away. Summary: Taken from the episode 'No Such Luck'. Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. "And we're glad they did," Lisa added, "Because thanks to the man that stopped by as well as a woman at the front desk, we were able to learn that you and dad apparently couldn't keep your own promise." Lincoln: Well, this was cool. I hope you enjoy, please try to be as gentle yet honest as possible as to what you think about the story (this is my first fanfiction in general). [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] # 17. the loud kamen rider by Dratinibro. ], Baseball Announcer: "Yowza." Which she did. We didn't find any though." Lincoln then explains to the viewers that with ten sisters, his schedule is always filled up, and . Lincoln and Lucy were dealing with a fictional ghost. How convenient for me. They thought that if they did or said something that this man didn't like, he would turn them to stone with his glare. "WELL, NOW THAT I KNOW HOW YOU KIDS FEEL ABOUT ME! Pre-Story Notice: It's amazing. I am an 11 year old boy, not some object to be pushed away and than used! AND I'M GOING TO GET A RESTRAINING ORDER JUST TO KEEP YOU AWAY!" Opening the door slightly, Luna stuck her head out and saw a man, somewhere in his early 30's with Caucasian skin and short brown hair, wearing a security uniform. I don't want you quit something you love because of me. I'm not. Incredible from The Incredibles on the cover. Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! No Such Luck (Alternative ending, my version) . 'What did he mean there's a massive storm heading her way?' Lucy: So, that's it then? Need i remind you looneys that its against the law to not shelter one of your own and what am i supposed to do now that all my belongings are gone!? SQUIRRELS WIN! 5 months of research ruined. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. No Such Luck part 2 | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. There must something we could do to put a proper spotlight on our dear duke. Leni: Like, I don't like it here anymore either! Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. Lisa: (sighs) Obviously one that needs our cerebrums and mental spirits adjusted. I hate that fact that you never make up for anything! The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. Lynn: HUH!?!?! I hate the fact that you all act like spoiled brats! "But, as usual," Lincoln added, walking towards his parents, "We didn't and as a result you got angry and grounded us." Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" Sam: Luna, I got your letter. turns her attention to Lincoln) "Get out! (pauses for a second) "You know what, I'll decide when we get there and see what movies are playing. divine001 on Tumblr I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! ", Luan: "The same goes for all of us. Nobody ruins my life, casts me out and then uses me, understand!? Lucy: Helping a brother who helped me. They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. You took it too far! Rusty has his own ritual before he plays with us. He quickly throws the squirrel suit into a rubbish bin.). ", Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myselffell for such bologna. UPDATE: 20/04/2018- the next chapter has been written I just need to correct some thing's from this chapter. ", Lincoln:[to the viewers] "Maybe I can move into Lisa's fallout shelter. Are you no longer grounded to the room?" MY TROPHIES!!! I thought you were my family! (Previously on The Loud House. [The softball playoffs. Hope you enjoy. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. He briefly looks at the family photo, beginning to cry. Lincoln and Lucy hung their heads in shame and embarrassment. His sisters join too and put Lynn in her place. Keep on writing fics like this! Luna: (with a broken voice) "We're really sorry bro! Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Lincoln turned to Lori and said, "I think we should call Aunt Ruth and tell her how we feel." Morag: Not stuck in your sister's shadows. Maybe I should just quit the team. The Loud House Re-Write - Linc or Swim. Theres nothing lucky about it! I can't believe I just hit one of my own sisters! Two of Lincoln's comics have references on them: The one he reads first has Mr. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. This shocked Rita, she thought Ruth enjoyed seeing her family. I hate that you sold my bed and everything I had! Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Lincoln: Okay. Lynn has a bruised cheek and the rest are all still coated in muck and wet from the sea. And I HATE LEECHES!" "But you know what's not fair?" Lori finished with. (Bursts into tears). He's just really mad, isn't he? "Now go to your room," Lori said, pointing to their parents' bedroom, but when they still sat on the couch feeling guilty, she yelled, "NOW!" First, she got groans from her children and then Lola said, "What isn't wrong with Aunt Ruth?" But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. The siblings began agreeing with that statement, but Lynn Sr. and Rita were frightened. Rita: Lincoln?! "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" (The other sisters come over onto the main couch. And with that the parents ran into the room and closed the door. What do you think, Pep? "Two outs in the bottom of the ninth, and the bases are loaded. ", Lynn: 'Oh my gosh, you're right. ", (Vanzilla is parked in the driveway. I'm sorry I was such a bad loser, all I wanted was for Lincoln to support me, to support us. You going to dress me up as a chipmunk or a donkey!? [Everyone headed to the living room to sleep together. [The crowd cheers, the Loud family gasps in shock] Lynn: "No! I hate how pathetic and chicken you all are! Her son said, "You and dad told us to behave ourselves and grounded us when we didn't, which we understand, but the fact that you said all that and decided your own advice was pointless! You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. At the end of the day, the family's bonds couldn't have been any stronger, they talked more and spent more time bonding, even if it just watching something on the TV. ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. Just because of superstitions?! I am bad luck! ", Lincoln: "Because your my sister." Lucy: Lincoln, stop! Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! After a minute, "Hello," the gruff sound of their Aunt Ruth was heard. And Lori and Lisa. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Everyone awed over this.] Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. No such Luck: Repair not Revenge, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Lola yelled. Lincoln and the parents come up.]. Lucy: (shedding tears) Me too. The End. The fact that you locked me out of my own home all because of superstitions ithurt, it really hurt it felt like a jab inmy heart." "Uuhhh," Luna started, unsure of how to start the conversation, "Hello, security dude. User blog:AlexKawa/Alternative Ending: No Such Luck | The Loud House Nosuchluck Stories - Wattpad He gives her bat a furious glare, smashes it in half and throws it out the window. Said baby had an angry face and she glared at her mom and dad, "Poo poo!" 2 months had come and gone and the parents were no longer grounded. I'm the Duke! As she started getting cleaning supplies to try and restore the lobby to a sense of glory, Maddie thought to herself, 'If the kids did this to the lobby on their way to find their parents. Just a heads up, this ending is going to feature a lot of yelling from the siblings and behavior/actions that some of you may believe that I'm representing the siblings in a bad light. Lola: Me too! After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. We don't need to get violent here. I've gotten complaints of loud noises, stuff breaking and a possible brawl breaking out in one hotel room. (The family submerge, coughing up water, covered in seaweed and muck, their sunnies, hats and sandals floating in the water and their swimsuits in tatters. Literature. Lincoln yelled, "WE HATE YOU!" Especially, useless, pathetic, irresponsible, arrogant, ungrateful, spoiled, annoying, disgusting, stupid, superstitious IMBECILES!!! I only told Leni, Luan, Lana, Lola and Lily. Felix got up to see the siblings storming downstairs, ready to give their parents a piece of their mind without a care for who or what gets broken in the process. Luna: We dont go to everybodys events all the time bro! Some blonde girl in a green dress gave us a room key and told us to enjoy our time here." Lincoln: Enjoy your life in suits! "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." We had no idea this family could be so gullible. All of you!" As much as she didn't want to, she knew that slamming the door in his face would make the situation even worse than it already was, so she opened the door enough for him to get in. "I can't even find anything funny to say because I'm that mad with both of you," Luan said, her parents becoming uncomfortable with the glare on the young comedian's face. I even threatened you to go to my game! Lynn Sr.: (tears up) I can't believe he said we're not a real family. Lana: You know, on second thought, I don't want to be at the beach. Wow, Lincoln, I'm really sorry. Linky was right, the softball games are really stupid!!! Lisa: I have truly disgraced the scientific community Lola: Does this mean Linky doesn't love us anymore? [In stepped David, Winston, Skippy, Silas, Paige, Francisco, Benny, Sam, Chaz, and Bobby. +7 more. Experimental One Shot. After she said, water came rushing out of the bathroom, ruining the carpet and drenching their footwear in water. I feel like a fool!" Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! What the guy said also got the officer's attention, not just because this guy just informed him of somebody who was working here without being officially employed but also how they were just given the ok to enter a room that was clearly occupied. Lisa: (with a broken voice, but not as loud): "Even an intelligence person such as myself fell for such bologna. She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." White hair extended ending9. Lincoln After Dark | The Loud House Fanon Wikia | Fandom Please leave non-hurtful comments down below, otherwise you will be blocked. (The rest of the family is enjoying their time with beach activities), Lincoln: (takes off his sunglasses, deeply annoyed) But unfortunately only when im in the squirrel suit(puts the head back on), (Several moments pass. OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! No Such Luck Alternate ending (Good) - DeviantArt I feel like a fool! Lincoln then brought his arms back, suggesting a family hug. he turned to the three men, who started sweating nervously, afraid of what would happen to them if they didn't say anything. Plot. Why do these three buffoons have the room. No Such Luck - Alternate ending - The Loud House Encyclopedia Anyway, here's my fanfiction. I heard you scream! This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. Lucy: Well, you covered for me and saved me from all this non-stop torment. ", Rita: "And this time, we'll let Lincoln decide what movie we'll watch. She then added, "I was just talking to my boyfriend when suddenly the sliding door closes and I can't get back in. The Princess and the Everlasting Emerald: A Royal Woods Fairytale. ", Baseball Announcer: "Talk about bad luck. The important thing is that we learn from them. "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." Hearing that caused everyone to become shocked, but they didn't know what to say. I wonder if the windows are locked?" Anyway, enjoy. Especially Lynn. Lynn Sr.: KIDS, please! As long as I know that it'strue, I wouldn't let this stop me from loving you, or anyone else. The minute after those words left Luna's lips, the security officer leaned his face in front of Luna's and responded with, "You can help me by letting me into your room. Leni stared crying and the rest of them followed suit. Lola: *Gasp* My lovely car! Leni: Linky, dont shout. Actually, there's something I need to do! "Yeah, I guess that's fair," Luna said, "we made a promise with you and we couldn't keep it." She walked into the spa and asked, in her usual ditzy tone, "Hey guys? The Louds. I'll definitely come to your next game, Lynn. Why are you being arrested?! Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? "Yeah they did," Luan responded with. ", Lincoln: "No. Lola: (sniffles) He called us all dummies.and a waste of life. Luan: (starts to cry) He also called us monsters..that we don't care for anyone, but ourselves.. Lana: He did have a point.